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ever so humid, and ever so hot;
steaming us, in a cemented pot.
full of noxious fumes and gasses,
painting all the people that it passes.

Rush hour. Car-kissing-car. Gridlocked.
angry gestures, middle-fingers cocked.
that unpleasant taste of being behind the wheel;
All, wanting-out of their sun-baked steel.
Just three million, me and one other,
Clothes sticking on like a sweaty lover.

under the suns' piercing glare,
I have to squeeze my sight and squint.
I strain my eyes as I over-stare,
cursing my windows' useless tint.

To see my home, so polluted;
The distant vista a scarlet blur.
a long moment, now convoluted;
duly opaqued by a heated slur.


All I want, is the smooth, cool, sleep of bed;
before the moon rears it's, ugly head.
- and the chocking night reels in,
to tire my body and make my head spin.


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art and poem by yours truly.:meow:


(simple watercolour with 4B pencil detailing)
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:iconfluplay:
~fluplay Jan 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You're awesome! you have an original nickname, also your artworks are awesome!
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~Night-Eater Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank yee, kind stranger :ahoy:
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~fluplay Jan 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Wish you all my best!:)
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:iconsorynarose:
Love the colors~!
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~Night-Eater Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
cheers, thank you.
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